Red Flat Rage solid story, spotty editing

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Red Flat Rage (Paperback)

by Loren Chancey

Sarah Schuster is back from her summer adventure where she found that by touching a shoe she could see what happened to its owner just before he/she lost it. She and her best friend, Molly, (who doesn’t know about Sarah’s gift) find a red sequins flat in a blocked off tower at the local church. When Sarah touches it she sees an argument happening. The vision gets interrupted but it does begin an adventure for Sarah, Molly, and Sarah’s ferret, Houdini.

Intriguing mystery with an element of danger. The issue is the spotty editing.  Most kids probably wouldn’t notice the change in editing, but as a teacher, it struck me.

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